Thank you, RussellClow, for your draft. Here are my comments:
What I liked: Your design is ineeded very clean with some pretty decent navigation.
What I did not like: The color pallette is very dark, almost dreary, and it's too "techie." It needs to be a bit brighter. Also, dark colors typically appeal more to men than women. I understand that this is very rough, so I know it's going to change anyway. Just thought I'd give you some pointers in the right direction if possible.
Keep it up!