Wacom, but too late

Lw421 · 08-04-2008, 12:30 AM

just did this for the wacom community contest, and then realised it was closed XD

this is my first animation design ever, so please give me some feedback

Chung Dha · 08-04-2008, 04:21 AM

Leave out the 1 pixel outline in pen. Also make the shape more correct cause it is bit crooked. If you use gradients don't only use it for one part use it for everything. Also try to make the pen top look more like an A. Cause it look more like W com.

Lw421 · 08-04-2008, 01:31 PM

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Originally Posted by Chung Dha

Leave out the 1 pixel outline in pen.

so should i do no outline or a thicker outline?

borsi · 08-31-2008, 09:48 AM

first I didn't realize the main concept that the A is a wacom pen. it's a good idea but should be more obvious on the picture.

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Lw421 Registered User Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 25	Wacom, but too late just did this for the wacom community contest, and then realised it was closed XD this is my first animation design ever, so please give me some feedback __________________ questions? comments? critique? lw421@hotmail.com Last edited by Lw421; 08-04-2008 at 01:00 AM.

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Chung Dha Design Team Member Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: The Netherlands Posts: 1,080	Leave out the 1 pixel outline in pen. Also make the shape more correct cause it is bit crooked. If you use gradients don't only use it for one part use it for everything. Also try to make the pen top look more like an A. Cause it look more like W com. __________________ ChungDha.com

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08-31-2008, 09:48 AM	#4 (permalink)
borsi Registered User Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 27	first I didn't realize the main concept that the A is a wacom pen. it's a good idea but should be more obvious on the picture.