U want my phone?

ram · 08-15-2008, 03:11 AM

As I'm new here thought it´ld be a good idea to give you my phone =)

Illustrator + Photoshop.

Cheers.
ram.-

Chung Dha · 08-15-2008, 04:49 AM

The silver button in the middle seem to be not correct rounded. Background and the phone are bit 2 different categories and they don't mix. Cause you got one of the high tech looking lady phone there, and a background with aquarel paint stains. Would had chosen some more sophisticated background with techy glow lines. Or somethings that has more glamor. Cause this background is bit more asian tinted or an urban street look .

Advice might be to make a moodboard on this phone what the costumers are what kind of look and feel fits this phone the best.

**rinaldidesigns** · 08-15-2008, 07:58 AM

wow, that is incredible(the button looks a little off)but overall AWESOME WORK

(I love your illustrations in your portfolio

)

NancyCarter · 08-15-2008, 09:36 AM

You are very talented! Impressive portfolio!

ram · 08-15-2008, 02:07 PM

I appreciate your comments Nancy and Rinaldi thank you!
and Chung Dha, you´ve given a really interesting point of view, thanks =)

Cheers

ram.-

Geko · 08-16-2008, 12:08 PM

Yesterday I saw a phone very simmilar to that one, i think it was samsung, really nice work, i like the background and the phone but separatedly. The button seems to be inset from de left and otherwise from the right. Keep the gooood work

bijaneiro · 09-04-2008, 07:57 AM

Really nice illustration.

SMJdesign · 09-05-2008, 10:28 AM

very nice, new background and it would be even better!

Max Stalker · 10-08-2008, 04:21 PM

Yeah, background distracts attention a bit. Put some grange image on top of this if you want to save background. Or replace current one with something which will be more in style of the phone... Maybe some colorfull rainbows ?

nickman · 10-08-2008, 05:32 PM

Nice, and with a UI it would look even better!

08-15-2008, 03:11 AM	#1 (permalink)
ram Registered User Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Florida, Uruguay Posts: 15	U want my phone? As I'm new here thought it´ld be a good idea to give you my phone =) Illustrator + Photoshop. Cheers. ram.- Last edited by ram; 08-15-2008 at 03:15 AM.

08-15-2008, 04:49 AM	#2 (permalink)
Chung Dha Design Team Member Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: The Netherlands Posts: 1,081	The silver button in the middle seem to be not correct rounded. Background and the phone are bit 2 different categories and they don't mix. Cause you got one of the high tech looking lady phone there, and a background with aquarel paint stains. Would had chosen some more sophisticated background with techy glow lines. Or somethings that has more glamor. Cause this background is bit more asian tinted or an urban street look . Advice might be to make a moodboard on this phone what the costumers are what kind of look and feel fits this phone the best. __________________ ChungDha.com

08-15-2008, 07:58 AM	#3 (permalink)
rinaldidesigns Administrator Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: VA Posts: 2,067	wow, that is incredible(the button looks a little off)but overall AWESOME WORK (I love your illustrations in your portfolio) __________________ join in the Community Contest Today...IT'S FUN! SWIMMIN' IN THE LOGOPOND

08-15-2008, 09:36 AM	#4 (permalink)
NancyCarter Designer/Moderator Join Date: May 2008 Location: Greater Seattle Area Posts: 532	You are very talented! Impressive portfolio! __________________ Blessings, Nancy www.NancyCarterDesign.com

08-15-2008, 02:07 PM	#5 (permalink)
ram Registered User Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Florida, Uruguay Posts: 15	I appreciate your comments Nancy and Rinaldi thank you! and Chung Dha, you´ve given a really interesting point of view, thanks =) Cheers ram.- __________________ my portfolio

08-16-2008, 12:08 PM	#6 (permalink)
Geko Registered User Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: SlP, Mexico Posts: 49	Yesterday I saw a phone very simmilar to that one, i think it was samsung, really nice work, i like the background and the phone but separatedly. The button seems to be inset from de left and otherwise from the right. Keep the gooood work __________________ visit http://gekodesigns.deviantart.com

09-04-2008, 07:57 AM	#7 (permalink)
bijaneiro Registered User Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 9	Really nice illustration.

09-05-2008, 10:28 AM	#8 (permalink)
SMJdesign Registered User Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Madison, WI Posts: 36	very nice, new background and it would be even better!

10-08-2008, 04:21 PM	#9 (permalink)
Max Stalker Registered User Join Date: Oct 2008 Posts: 12	Yeah, background distracts attention a bit. Put some grange image on top of this if you want to save background. Or replace current one with something which will be more in style of the phone... Maybe some colorfull rainbows ? Last edited by Max Stalker; 10-08-2008 at 04:28 PM.

10-08-2008, 05:32 PM	#10 (permalink)
nickman Registered User Join Date: Oct 2008 Posts: 9	Nice, and with a UI it would look even better!

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