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Old 09-05-2008, 01:46 PM   #1 (permalink)
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My business card design, input welcomed.

This is my business card design. I am not a graphic designer by trade, but rather a hydraulic engineer. Let me know what you think.

I updated the castle logo to a web 2.0 style logo. This is a fairly conservative design because engineering is a conservative field.

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Old 09-06-2008, 04:47 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Hmmmm, looks very dull actually and you should look out printing web2.0 design some of them looks odd when they are printed on paper. White shine areas sometimes look like if the printer malfunctioned and printed that part lighter than other parts than as a shine.

I am not digging the layout design. It is a pretty plain design actually you should search some special businesscard design online, some might inspire you to do it differrently.
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Does the castle have anything to do with your job? If not I would choose an image that symbolizes your work in a way. Maybe a venturi tube - thats mathching your field and is abstract too.
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Does the castle have anything to do with your job? If not I would choose an image that symbolizes your work in a way. Maybe a venturi tube - thats mathching your field and is abstract too.
The castle is the logo for the company I work for.
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Old 09-08-2008, 05:47 PM   #5 (permalink)
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This is just a quick suggestion (not an award-winning design or anyting) -- I think the card needs to look clean and professional. Nothing trendy -- you want people to trust the USACE; it needs to be able to stand the test of time.
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Old 09-09-2008, 02:09 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Hmmmm, looks very dull actually and you should look out printing web2.0 design some of them looks odd when they are printed on paper. White shine areas sometimes look like if the printer malfunctioned and printed that part lighter than other parts than as a shine.

I am not digging the layout design. It is a pretty plain design actually you should search some special businesscard design online, some might inspire you to do it differrently.
Thanks for the advice on the printing. I guess I was looking for feedback about the design, do you have any actual suggestions? or examples Chung? I can't (unfortunately) do anything too creative because most engineers just don't get anything abstract or artistic.

Thanks for the sample KHDZN, I'll think about using some of the layout you suggested. Good point about the clean look. At this point I am only designing the card for myself, not the Corps in general so all input is welcome.

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Old 09-09-2008, 02:29 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Am I allowed to make this into a community design contest?
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Old 09-09-2008, 02:32 PM   #8 (permalink)
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I think KHDZN's on the right track as far as the design and colors. You don't want it to be to colorful because... lets face it enginieering is viewed as non-flashy boring work (at least that seems to be the general interpretation of it) I'd stick to no more than 3 colors(maybe just shades of the same color and work from there. Also I think the K.I.S.S. method works pretty well here too good luck!
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It looks too simple and at the same time busy!
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Old 12-05-2008, 04:29 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Your design is OK with an engineer's card but I think that it needs to be in less colors.
Why not to put some engineering tools on the top corner of the card?
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