Feedback on my portfolio, please!

Gerhard Schlee · 10-28-2008, 01:54 PM

Hi all, I'm here to ask you to enter my deviantART profile and take a look at my designs, and tell what you think about it. Be as honest and constructive as you can! I really need to improve, and I'm counting on you to tell where to start!

Here's the link:
Geraldix on deviantART

SliverFX · 10-28-2008, 02:19 PM

Loved the lace logo, that was quite a great idea! <- Anazakel

Your other logos are good, too. Audace boutique was sweet. Good work there

blakeissuarez · 10-28-2008, 06:34 PM

yeah the gothic fashion logo was nice. I think it could do with some work:
I don't like the spacing in between gothic and fashion.
Also, maybe you could try a different typeface for gothic fashion, like trade or franklin.

Gerhard Schlee · 10-28-2008, 06:49 PM

I'll try that, blakeissuarez! and tnx, SliverFX and blakeissuarez

Gerhard Schlee · 10-29-2008, 10:31 AM

Just submitted some new stuff, so if you could take a look...

christyburke · 11-08-2008, 10:52 PM

You have some really great ideas!

jones8 · 11-09-2008, 02:59 AM

I like the electro city logo, it reminds me of the 80's, when electro really got kicking.

Gerhard Schlee · 11-10-2008, 09:19 PM

tnx a lot, people!

Elessar · 11-16-2008, 07:55 AM

Looks nice!
Sometimes it looks a tiny bit... uhm... to simple.
And some use of color would be nice!

Gerhard Schlee · 11-16-2008, 04:23 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Elessar

Looks nice!
Sometimes it looks a tiny bit... uhm... to simple.
And some use of color would be nice!

Thanks for the critics, I'll look after that!

Gerhard Schlee · 11-26-2008, 12:18 PM

New stuff and some much needed revisions submitted, check it out

Geraldix on deviantART and don't forget to give me your feedback, which would be much appreciated!

Gerhard Schlee · 12-22-2008, 07:48 PM

In order to stimulate the feedback I'm NOT getting here, I'm posting below some of the work that can be found at geraldix.deviantart.com, in order to make easier for people to access my stuff.

You are all invited to make any constructive criticism you wish, here AND at the works respective deviantart.com links (which can be found below each thumbnail), if you can. In these links you can also find additional info on the designs.

And remember, these is not all the stuff of mine that you can found at geraldix.deviantart.com, so, please, pass by!

Bruve by ~Geraldix on deviantART

lanca by ~Geraldix on deviantART

Audace Boutique by ~Geraldix on deviantART

Brainstorm Branding+Design by ~Geraldix on deviantART

deviantART logo by ~Geraldix on deviantART

Electro City by ~Geraldix on deviantART

Gerhard Schlee logo V2 by ~Geraldix on deviantART

Atelier Malerhaus logo by ~Geraldix on deviantART

Bruve Alternative Symbol by ~Geraldix on deviantART

Please, spend 5 minutes in geraldix.deviantart.com!

Gerhard Schlee · 12-29-2008, 12:59 PM

NERD by ~Geraldix on deviantART

Comments, people!!

Gerhard Schlee · 12-30-2008, 12:55 PM

dot com by ~Geraldix on deviantART

lawyer logo by ~Geraldix on deviantART

Creative week...

Thanks for giving me feedback... NOT!

machineman · 12-30-2008, 04:28 PM

I like your work Gerhard! you do good logo's colors, fonts ect... maybe you know this but try uploading in gif format for cleaner edges.

keep going never give up, it will pay off eventually. ~ best wishes from Mikey (machineman)

machineman · 12-30-2008, 04:29 PM

Gerhard Schlee · 12-30-2008, 06:23 PM

Wow I actually didn't know that about .gif, thank you very much! I will update my stuff asap! Thanks A LOT for the tip AND feedback!

Have a nice New Year!

machineman · 12-30-2008, 08:18 PM

Your welcome, everybody is always learning new things.

10-28-2008, 01:54 PM	#1 (permalink)
Gerhard Schlee Registered User Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Porto Alegre, Rio Grande do Sul, Brasil Posts: 34	Feedback on my portfolio, please! Hi all, I'm here to ask you to enter my deviantART profile and take a look at my designs, and tell what you think about it. Be as honest and constructive as you can! I really need to improve, and I'm counting on you to tell where to start! Here's the link: Geraldix on deviantART

11-09-2008, 02:59 AM	#7 (permalink)
jones8 Registered User Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 6	I like the electro city logo, it reminds me of the 80's, when electro really got kicking. __________________ Modern Furniture at RegencyShop.com \| barcelona chair

11-26-2008, 12:18 PM	#11 (permalink)
Gerhard Schlee Registered User Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Porto Alegre, Rio Grande do Sul, Brasil Posts: 34	New stuff and some much needed revisions submitted, check it out Geraldix on deviantART and don't forget to give me your feedback, which would be much appreciated! Last edited by Gerhard Schlee; 11-27-2008 at 12:17 PM.

12-22-2008, 07:48 PM	#12 (permalink)
Gerhard Schlee Registered User Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Porto Alegre, Rio Grande do Sul, Brasil Posts: 34	In order to stimulate the feedback I'm NOT getting here, I'm posting below some of the work that can be found at geraldix.deviantart.com, in order to make easier for people to access my stuff. You are all invited to make any constructive criticism you wish, here AND at the works respective deviantart.com links (which can be found below each thumbnail), if you can. In these links you can also find additional info on the designs. And remember, these is not all the stuff of mine that you can found at geraldix.deviantart.com, so, please, pass by! Bruve by ~Geraldix on deviantART lanca by ~Geraldix on deviantART Audace Boutique by ~Geraldix on deviantART Brainstorm Branding+Design by ~Geraldix on deviantART deviantART logo by ~Geraldix on deviantART Electro City by ~Geraldix on deviantART Gerhard Schlee logo V2 by ~Geraldix on deviantART Atelier Malerhaus logo by ~Geraldix on deviantART Bruve Alternative Symbol by ~Geraldix on deviantART Please, spend 5 minutes in geraldix.deviantart.com! __________________ geraldix.deviantart.com

12-29-2008, 12:59 PM	#13 (permalink)
Gerhard Schlee Registered User Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Porto Alegre, Rio Grande do Sul, Brasil Posts: 34	NERD by ~Geraldix on deviantART Comments, people!! __________________ geraldix.deviantart.com

10-28-2008, 02:19 PM	#2 (permalink)
SliverFX Registered User Join Date: Mar 2008 Posts: 13	Loved the lace logo, that was quite a great idea! <- Anazakel Your other logos are good, too. Audace boutique was sweet. Good work there

10-28-2008, 06:34 PM	#3 (permalink)
blakeissuarez Registered User Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 27	yeah the gothic fashion logo was nice. I think it could do with some work: I don't like the spacing in between gothic and fashion. Also, maybe you could try a different typeface for gothic fashion, like trade or franklin.

10-28-2008, 06:49 PM	#4 (permalink)
Gerhard Schlee Registered User Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Porto Alegre, Rio Grande do Sul, Brasil Posts: 34	I'll try that, blakeissuarez! and tnx, SliverFX and blakeissuarez

10-29-2008, 10:31 AM	#5 (permalink)
Gerhard Schlee Registered User Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Porto Alegre, Rio Grande do Sul, Brasil Posts: 34	Just submitted some new stuff, so if you could take a look...

11-08-2008, 10:52 PM	#6 (permalink)
christyburke Registered User Join Date: Nov 2008 Posts: 10	You have some really great ideas!

11-10-2008, 09:19 PM	#8 (permalink)
Gerhard Schlee Registered User Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Porto Alegre, Rio Grande do Sul, Brasil Posts: 34	tnx a lot, people!

11-16-2008, 07:55 AM	#9 (permalink)
Elessar Registered User Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: The Netherlands Posts: 3	Looks nice! Sometimes it looks a tiny bit... uhm... to simple. And some use of color would be nice!

12-30-2008, 12:55 PM	#14 (permalink)
Gerhard Schlee Registered User Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Porto Alegre, Rio Grande do Sul, Brasil Posts: 34	dot com by ~Geraldix on deviantART lawyer logo by ~Geraldix on deviantART Creative week... Thanks for giving me feedback... NOT! __________________ geraldix.deviantart.com

12-30-2008, 04:28 PM	#15 (permalink)
machineman Registered User Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Somerville Mass. Posts: 15	I like your work Gerhard! you do good logo's colors, fonts ect... maybe you know this but try uploading in gif format for cleaner edges. keep going never give up, it will pay off eventually. ~ best wishes from Mikey (machineman) __________________ "Two are better than one" Last edited by machineman; 12-30-2008 at 04:33 PM.

12-30-2008, 04:29 PM	#16 (permalink)
machineman Registered User Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Somerville Mass. Posts: 15	__________________ "Two are better than one" Last edited by machineman; 12-30-2008 at 04:33 PM.

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12-30-2008, 06:23 PM	#17 (permalink)
Gerhard Schlee Registered User Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Porto Alegre, Rio Grande do Sul, Brasil Posts: 34	Wow I actually didn't know that about .gif, thank you very much! I will update my stuff asap! Thanks A LOT for the tip AND feedback! Have a nice New Year! __________________ geraldix.deviantart.com Last edited by Gerhard Schlee; 12-30-2008 at 07:11 PM.

12-30-2008, 08:18 PM	#18 (permalink)
machineman Registered User Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Somerville Mass. Posts: 15	Your welcome, everybody is always learning new things. __________________ "Two are better than one"